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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Dec 31, 2008 2:55:43 GMT -5
-shot for lame title- I couldn't help myself XD
Okay, so Cloverstar is going to get greencough...I was trying to think of a way she could let Soulstar know she's sick because it's not like ShadowClan will just go tell ThunderClan that their leader is sick XD
So I was thinking that perhaps when it's still whitecough and she doesn't think it's going to get worse she could go meet with Soulstar and get scolded for being out when she's sick. Then she gets greencough...or something along those lines XD
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Post by [R] a v e n on Dec 31, 2008 3:09:47 GMT -5
I actually like the title, xD. We'll have to make this organized when the brainstorming is done. xD
Ok so Greencough and Whitecough. -ponders- Okay how about they decide to meet every once in a while at Four Creeks, and one time Cloverstar comes and is coughing. Soulstar is worried and asks her what's wrong, she says it's just a cough and the medicine cat thinks it's whitecough. Soulstar becomes concerned and tells her she needs to go get rest and such. Then Cloverstar misses a gathering and he knows that she has gotten worse?
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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Dec 31, 2008 3:13:20 GMT -5
I like the missing the gathering. lol poor angsty Soulstar. I was thinking that if she didn't get greencough, either Soulstar or Cloverstar could get into a fight with a fox or something near the border while the other was around....just more plot lol. Should there be a cat that finds out and is sworn to secrecy about the whole thing? > >
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Post by [R] a v e n on Dec 31, 2008 3:31:19 GMT -5
Not a fox! THE WOLF! xD. Perhaps before the Greencough/Whitecough they could fight off a wolf together, maybe protecting another cat and that other cat be the one that figures out about them? The other cat should be a she cat from Shadowclan or something.....
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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Dec 31, 2008 3:34:13 GMT -5
If Deathy's up to it, maybe it can be Silvermask. It could play a part in the whole relationship between the leader and the medicine cat =P plus you know how intuitive those meddies are most of the time lol. If it is Silvermask, then Cloverstar can make her promise not to tell anyone. TEH WOLF ARRARAR <---wtf?
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Post by [R] a v e n on Dec 31, 2008 3:42:10 GMT -5
lol yay for that wolf that likes hunting little cats. Remember? xD! As for Deathy and Silvermask? That would be great ^^ Now the ultimate question. 0.0 Will Soulstar and Cloverstar have little Soulstar's and Cloverstar's? xD Eventually I mean?
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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Dec 31, 2008 3:45:37 GMT -5
Yeah they should ^-^ Then one or two (depending on how many kits she has) could go over to ThunderClan to live with Soulstar and the others stay in ShadowClan with Clover. Then Silvermask (Or whoever discovers them) can be all like 'I know who's kits those are' or something like that. I dun really know lol
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Post by [R] a v e n on Dec 31, 2008 4:01:38 GMT -5
We could do that OR we could expand the plot and have Silvermask, or somethin', know who's kits they are and such. Clover and Soul want to keep it a secret then the kits, or one of them, starts asking who their father is when they see another litter's father playing with his kits or something. Then have a long unique and interesting plot with them trying to figure out who he is or something, all the while Clover is trying to shush them. Somethin'. xD
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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Dec 31, 2008 19:07:20 GMT -5
Yeah and I have ideas for names for some of the kits. Shadowkit, Thunderkit and Honeykit. Shadow and Thunder for obvious reasons...perhaps too obvious XD and Honeykit because I was eating clover honey on the way home and it was delicious.
But I had an idea and let's see if I can remember it....Oh! For the wolf I was thinking that the ShadowClan she-cat that discovers about the two leaders is near the border and the wolf attacks her. Well Cloverstar, who was nearby, rushes to aid her Clanmate and Soulstar who is also near the border hears the fighting and comes to help as well. Maybe Cloverstar gets injured (Which helps with a different part of my plotting) and when Soulstar begins to worry over her the she-cat noticies something, but doesn't say anything about it. Then later when their kits are born and the she-cat asks the who the father is, Cloverstar refuses to tell it and claims that she-cats have the right to keep the father of their kits a secret. Then the she-cat takes a shot and guesses Soulstar which freaks Cloverstar out and makes her promise her Clanmate to keep it a secret. or something...
And I was thinking that on the way out of Four Creeks in Unruly, she can misjudge her jump and fall in. So now she's soaked but theirs no time to dry off. She promises Soulstar she'll go straight back to camp to warm up and get some herbs from Silvermask, but she doesn't think it's a big deal and goes hunting instead. Well that's how the whitecough begins. Then if she's injured fighting the wolf it would make her even weaker as the whitecough escalates into greencough. Perhaps her wound gets infected and she loses a life by the end of it all. I haven't decided on the whole losing a life thing yet > >
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Post by [R] a v e n on Dec 31, 2008 23:06:44 GMT -5
I like it! As for the kits maybe something that has to do with shadow and thunder but a different word? Like Gloom...or Dusk, or something. We can think about the kits later if you want ^^ But I think there should be like 3 or 4, cause I want one, I think you want one and we should have someone else play one.
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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Dec 31, 2008 23:10:04 GMT -5
Yeah. Night and Lightning? XD I dunno.
And I like four cuz then I get one and you get one and two other people get one and then two can go to ThunderClan and two can stay. Or maybe just three so Cloverstar only has to part with one kit. StarClan knows she'd love them that much XD
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Post by [R] a v e n on Jan 5, 2009 22:51:39 GMT -5
^^ Well how about......you pick two, one for you and one for random, then I will pick out the other two? Keep in mind they have to have the same colors as Souls and Clover. ^^ As for going to TC? -ponders- we could make a whole other part of the plot with that, having them not knowing who their father is and such, then find out some way or another. xD
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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Jan 5, 2009 22:56:27 GMT -5
Poor ThunderClan kits, they don't even get to know their mother XD At least the ShadowClan kits will know Cloverstar > > Hmmm I think I already have an idea for one of the kits >D
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Post by ♣[Clover]♣ on Feb 17, 2009 11:13:50 GMT -5
Okay so I printed everything out just now so I can work on making an official 'plot post' while I'm in physics and Spanish today. I should have something by the time I get home because now would be a good opportunity for Cloverstar to sneak away and then Silvermask follows and then the wolf attacks and all that stuff we already discussed happens ^-^
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Post by [R] a v e n on Feb 17, 2009 19:09:31 GMT -5
^^ okays. Sounds great. [/color]
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