Hazelstar of StarClan

[♫Wither♫]

Name: Hazelstar
Age: 538 moons appears 48 moons
Gender: Female
Desired Home: Starclan
Desired Position: Leader
Appearance:

Hazelstar is a singapura she-cat. Her pelt is black-ticked sepia colored coat. Her eyes are an extremely large and round hazel. Hazelstar’s tail is slender, slightly shorter than the length of the body and has a blunt tip. The tip of her tail is a raven black. Her build is small and stocky, but she is pure lean muscle. She has large, slightly pointed and deep cupped ears. Hazelstar has long and skinny legs.

Personality:

Hazelstar is known for her shy and clumsy personality, that is, when she’s Hazelstar. She suffers from dissociative identity disorder. Hazelstar goes from a timid and clumsy to being bold and skillful. When she becomes her other self, Hazelstar refers to her/himself as Fleckstar. Fleckstar usually only comes out when she is under pressure, in danger, or when her heart rate speeds up. While Hazelstar can barely talk to another cat without breaking into a nervous sweat, Fleckstar usually knows just what to say and flirts with pretty much everybody (I mean everybody! Gender is no option for Fleckstar! XD). Hazelstar is clueless about her other half and still ponders on how she got such a high rank, not knowing it was mostly the work of Fleckstar. Whenever someone tries to tell her of this other cat “inside” of her, she doesn’t believe them.

History:

Hazelkit was born into WindClan with her brother, Fleckkit. She and Fleckkit did everything together and knew everything about each other; they were the best of friends. But when Hazelkit was 2 ½ moons old, Fleckkit died of greencough. She was completely devastated at the loss of her brother. When Hazelpaw was around six moons old, she attended her first battle; as I said before, Hazelpaw is extremely clumsy, so she really screwed up when she was fighting. Just as she was about to receive a death blow, Fleckpaw emerged and beat the foxdung out of the warrior that pinned her down along with many others. She returned to normal after the battle ended and became very confused, remarking, ‘I blinked and it was over’, which earned her many strange looks. After awhile, almost everyone but her knew about Fleckpaw. Fleckpaw became one of the popular cats, but Hazelpaw remained at the bottom. Sometimes other cats would try and scare her to make Fleckpaw “come out”. Awhile after Hazelgaze/Fleckpelt earned her warrior name, she was made deputy of WindClan to her shock and Fleckpelt’s pride. It was only a matter of moons before she became leader of her clan. After a few years of leading WindClan (Fleckstar did most of the leading), Hazelstar died and became leader of StarClan.

Sample post:

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Family:

Mother: Scratchclaw (Deceased)
Father: Dustheart (Deceased)
Brother: Fleckkit (Deceased)

Other:

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[!P.I.E!]

Looks pretty good to me, apperance needs to be like one sentance longer... but it's cool, Nice job Wither.

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[♫Wither♫]

The format thingy said I only had to write 8 sentences for the appearance. I counted 8 about 3 times already. Unless there is some other reason I need to do 9 sentences. If there is, could you please tell me? Well, have a nice day! Wait a minute, (looks out window) Holy foxdung! It's night! Last time I checked it was 6 in the morning! Where did all that time go? (Goes off to search for the time.) ;D

[!P.I.E!]

Oh hehe, it looked at little short from my perspective, but if it's 8 sentances then it's good

Accepted

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