Aphoticrainstar or is it Aphoticstar

[D.e.a.t.h & Aphotic]

Name: Aphoticstar (rain)
Age: 500 moons
Gender: Female
Desired Home: Crescentclan
Desired Position: Leader
Appearance:

.x. I have been long forgotten
Appearance:
A medium sized black and orange she-cat. Aphotic probably has a bit of tortoiseshell in her blood. Her fur over all is odd. Her main fur color is black but it has quite a few patches,big and small, of orange. Most of her tail is completely black. Her paws are miss matched and the two on the right are a light cream/orange color. The other two are black. Its a bit of a thick short furred coat that protects her from enemy claws but makes it very hot for her at times , shes sheds a lot of fur. She has yellow and amber eyes.

Personality:

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She's a very smart cat and think things over well. She is know for her cunning and ability to move quickly. Aphoticstar does what ever she can for her clan and wants them to succeed and flourish. She may be a bit ambitious in that sense she also has a slight love of power and control but she's not insane. Aphoticstar can be sarcastic but she also enjoys a bit of adventure every now and then. Most of the time its hard to read her face but every now and then she'll let her guard drop.

She got a bit of hurt feelings deep down from being turned away from the Starclan. She wasn't evil but the choices she made turned out for the worst. She masked that pain long ago she no longer dwells on it.

History:

[/i].x. but who are they to deny me heaven.x.[/i]
History:
Kit
When Aphotic was a kit the world of the clan's did not exist. Her mother was constantly her guardian and her father was an unknown tom. She was taught quickly how to hunt in fight in the ever changing battles that went on.

Apprentice
At this age she witnessed the union of the clans a spectacular thing as ancestors long past gathered as one and clans where split she was whisked away to shadowclan. There her mother was able to die out her days in peace while Aphotics tail was just beginning. The start of her troubles was a simple board war more organized than attacks before she accidentally killed a warrior tainting her paws with blood.

Warrior
Her ambition took over this part of her life and she was going to great length's to get there. She was cunning and her want for power was so strong she was blinded by it. Her first move was to win favor of cats around her she did it expertly play with apprentice and kits that where not hers. She did have her own kits but that was a minor detail in her life she left them in the care of her deer friend who had just had kits. He friend raised them as her own. The next step was to remove the deputy this she did smoothly too. It was about this time she heard a voice that helped her down her dark path. It was the only soul that the starclan had kicked from its ranks. With the spirit at her side she dispached the deputy and then the leader died of illness poisoned by Aphoticrains hand.

Leader
she took her new post and the spirit began to fade from her side and she now realized the front of what she had done and who she had killed. For a few nights in the dark she cried and begged for forgiveness.
She led her clan well and did an exelant job only her former friend knew what she had done and so her it was her friend who ended her life but shed lived a long time.

The after life
There was only darkness after death no one came to her for days tell the sent someone to tell her she would never walk in the realms of the starclan. They left Aphoticstar alone in the dark and then later the spirit that had been waiting they talked and in her anger she killed the cat and then bgan the Cresentclan



[/blockquote]Sample post:

we shall see which one of us is really hell
Sample post:
It was dark and not a thing moved she lay waiting to open her eyes or feel something she was sure she was still alive. She could think but there was nothing there but blackness and alone she stayed as she had been for many a day denaing the fact that she was dead. If I where truly dead I would be in the Starclan. She had held firm to the belief but she was staring to lose hope. Finally a small glimmer could be seen in the distance it got closer change from star into cat. Aphotic let out a sigh of relief they had come for her but then she saw the cats eyes there was no welcome there as she now faced the leader she had killed. "you are not welcome and you shall never feel the land of the spirits under your paws." his voice sounded clear. "you kid me " Aphotic said sharply but the dead leaders eyes gave her truth and with that he vanished in a glitter of lights leaveing Aphoticstar once again in the darkness.[/size]

Family:

Familiy:
Mother: Jasmine
Father: unknow
Kits: Gingerkit, Yarrowkit

Other:

nope

[[R] a v e n]

Accepted! Lovely Signature. ^^[/color]