Fawncloud - Crescentclan - Finished

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Name: Fawncloud formally Fawnclaw
Age: 565 moons
Gender: Male
Desired Home: Crescentclan
Desired Position: Meddie
Appearance:

With large muscular shoulders and a well proportioned bone structure Fawncloud is a beautiful cat. He has large sloping shoulders with a strong back and a thick neck, overall the 'bodyguard' type of cat, or so he looks like it. He is a long furred brown Maine Coon tabby with fur that hardly ever gets tangled. Being a brown tabby means his colors range from pale creamy white on his chin to an orange tint on his underfur, a normal brown, a dark brown, and finally black.

His legs are shorter, as if he had stunted growth as a kit. His legs are a soft brown color with pale brown stripes crossing down towards his paws getting lighter as they go. Along the middle of his back is a thick black stripe, it breaks off into lighter black stripes and cross his sides. His tail is black on top and light brown on the bottom, his belly is a pale orange brown.

Fawnclouds eyes are a beautiful pale green, in certain lights it appears almost whiteish green.He has small little ears with a tuff of fur atop the tips, giving the the lynx look. He has a dark pink nose with long brown whiskers in a field of white and orangey fur. He has long teeth, pearly white looking. His tail is long, fantastic for balance. He has cute little paws with long razor sharp claws, but hey! He was a fighter in his last life not the current one, so he has no scars. In his past life he attacked the leader, Fogstar, and hurt his leg badly, he no longer limps but sometimes he remembers the battle and limps, either that or he ends up limping subconsciously and does it physically.

Personality:

When with the living
Fawncloud was known as Fawnclaw when he was with the living, his clan being Shadowclan. He was ruthless, unkind, and quite evil. He never cared what others thought, actually he went out of his way to make others miserable. He went loner for a few moons, during that time he used this charming side and made his way through the lands of the other three clans and the loner lands. During this time he realized no one would like him if he wasn't nicer, but frankly he didn't care and carried on with his 'evilness'.

When he was a seasoned warrior his ambitions nearly got the best of him, he had a gift from Starclan, a gift of dreams and such. He ignored it, but at times attempted to use it to help him gain a leadership position. It didn't work well, he ended up getting into a huge fight with the clans current leader Fogstar, this injured his leg bad enough that for the rest of his life he walked with a slight limp. He also injured the leader, that made him happy for awhile and treated others as if he had killed the leader and taken his position.

Crescentclan
When he died he went through an entire change of personality, he hated himself and what he had done. He also realized that Starclan had believed in him but not anymore, they had lost hope, this made him sad if not depressed. Now in his second life he lives as a happier cat that has finally found his place as medicine cat. He knows what is right and what is wrong, and he also knows that being nice is a good thing, he now goes out of his way to be nice or help, but his old personality sometimes comes back to haunt him and other cats.

History:

Kit
Fawncloud was born in Shadowclan as a tyrant from the start, his name was Fawnkit because of his strangely spotted and striped coat as a kit. His mother was a kind cat, Moustlight, his father was a brave and brilliant cat, Deerpelt. They both couldn't understand why their son, their second born kit, was a crazy evil cat. They thought Starclan had shunned them for their separate clan relationship. His mother was from Riverclan and his father from Shadowclan. Mouselight moved to Shadowclan shortly after she met Deerpelt, then moved back when Fawnkit was made an apprentice. Overall the other kits didn't want to play with him because he always bullied them.

Apprentice
Fawnpaw was still evil as an apprentice, his father wasn't to happy letting this apprentice call him his father. Fawnpaws mentor, Shellcoat, was not ashamed of his apprentice, in fact he figured that maybe he could train Fawnpaw well and one day he would become leader, making Shellcoat deputy or something. The thought pleased the young warrior and he tried very hard to teach Fawnpaw every technique he could get his paws on.

Warrior
Fawnpaw was named Fawnclaw when he was make a warrior at 12 moons, his mentor was proud, his father? Scared. Fawnclaw never liked the idea of him not being able to rise high in the ranks of the clan, saying that I also say that he tried very hard to work his way into the deputies mind to get the deputy to retire and recommend him for the position. Sadly that didn't happen and he ended up trying to take it into his own hands.

He attacked the leader, Fogstar, in the lava cave in one part of their territory. He was angry and upset, as well as murderous. He fought long and hard, the leader severely injured his leg and Fawnclaw? Fawnclaw tore Fogstar's ear and ripped out on of his claws. Fogstar pinned Fawnclaw down and asked him why he was trying to kill him, Fawnclaw answered "I deserve to be leader Fogstar. Starclan has given me visions of greatness and I intend to take that, if force when needs be." Fogstar gave him benifit of the doubt but put him under surveillance. Fawnclaw latter passed away in a fight for his clan on the Riverclan border, he was fighting a large timber wolf at an attempt to protect a mother and her kits.

An unknown part of his past is a small part of his life when he fell in love and had a daughter named Mackralwind, and a son named Longwater. They have a large part in his life past, present and future.

Crescentclan
When Fawnclaw was admitted to Crescentclan and not Starclan he became depressed and then finally realized that he still had his gift. Seeing that he still had it he wished to become medicine cat and do good. He was renamed Fawncloud and became medicine cat and now devotes his life to healing others and helping the clans.

Sample post:

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Family:

Badgerclaw: Dad (Dead)
Spiritsong: Mother (Dead)
Longwater: Son (Dead)
Mackralwind: Daughter (Dead)
Baypelt: Stepson (Dead)
Echosong: Grand Daughter (Alive)
Jacklekit: Great Grand Son (Alive)
Jasminekit: Great Grand Daughter (Alive)

Other:

His Granddaugher will come in as part of a personal plot ^^

[D.e.a.t.h & Aphotic]

Accepted! ^.^ not sure if I need to but I said it anyway.

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Nope your supposed to. Yayz.[/color]